Gheata's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I'm-a Wario, I'm-a gonna Win!]

You're so talented, but so far from God and so deep in the spirit of this world :( Jesus loves you and because of that He suffers for you. He really wish you to come to Him and repent so that He can lead you to Heaven and give you a place there.

TristanTait responds:

Thanks for the heads up there Gheata, but I think I'm pretty good for all that.
I'm not too sure what it is about a drawing of Wario that would upset Jesus so much... maybe he got hit by a red shell in the last lap on Mario Kart and this is shaking up some old and painful memories?

[Rifle warrior]

Not bad. Looks made in a hurry tho.

Extellus responds:

It does give off the impression that it was made in a hurry, although I'd say I'm just not that good at colouring in photoshop so I'd much rather leave it simple than overdo it like I did this one http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/extellus/the-autumn-warrior :S

[Sonya the Assassin]

Perhaps people will see reality more clear if the ones who do evil would be fat and ugly.

airman4 responds:

Hahah good one

[Summer Breeze]

I like her daring spirit! Except the satanist sign, this art is very dinamic, well colored and joyful. Nice.

TaraGraphika responds:

Summer is always so daring.rock and roll.

Thank you for the nice compliment Gheata. Nice to see you around again*^*

[Bare Knuckle Bruiser]

3rd eye does not look like an eye. You can't just take left/right eye and put it as a 3rd eye. You must think how would the body develop a 3rd eye. The mouth looks a bit rotated too much. It's something about the arms... they look to be more man-like than woman-like. If that white cloud is her heavy breathing, then why is it so distant from the mouth? If it is the air from the fast movement of her left fist (looking from her perspective), then where is the movement of the fist? The picture overall is too static, the body itself does not express movement.

WooleyWorld responds:

Gheata woke up this morning like "man I'm gonna nitpick the fuck out of WooleyWorld". Lol.

She's turned, so even an eye that looks centered will have an appearance of being turned as well. That is a puff of air, indicated by the "huff huff" and the mouth is in a blowing position. It may be a little far from the mouth but I didn't want to block the drawing with the puff. Sue me?
Muscles are not exclusive to men. She is a boxer with muscular arms. She also has muscular everything else, so I don't know why you chose arms to point out.
Boxers don't get very dynamic when they are in a pose like this and moving around the matt. Also this is a pose desired by the commissioner.

When you're giving proper critique, be sure to say what works in a piece. You don't just blow the fuck out of it. You just comes off like a biased asshole if you do.

If you want to get at it more, PM me.

[Doodle 41]

Very nice, but her legs are somehow too fat.

WooleyWorld responds:

Maybe to you.

[Sand Lady of Freedom]

Awessome. Tho I do not get it. What do the symbol mean?

airman4 responds:

It's an Invisible prison i guess
Surrounded and circled around
It's just a character i created , i wanted also to draw someone holding a giant Pole / flag

[Khermann Visual portrait 02]

Nice, but could you do a full-body draw, please?

airman4 responds:

Right now , i dunno but i'll do my best
Good idea , thanks

[Khermann Visual portraits 01]

Nice! I dunno what to comment more. I just like it. Make more of this stuff.

airman4 responds:

Thanks , yep , i'll upload a new one today