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I will give you a negative review :) The monster just stays with the mouth open. It is not drawn as if it just spit that acid. The archer looks like she ventures towards us. It would've been cooler if she looker like she was in the process or reloading bow while she run, but that is just my personal view. onster's hands are twisted. I do not know is it is handicaped or something, but the hands should's shown that he just came out of the earth. The big boulder from right is lifted perfectly horizontaly where venom hit the stone. That is very unreal. No stone will fly horizontaly when you throw something in it. The celling is not detailed at all but I guess you wanted it that way (and because it is dark). If that is the entrance (big square where light comes in), it should have also a rope or something to suggest that ther hero came through there. Long story short, the draw is not dynamic tho you tried. So tho your drawing skills are 5/5, I will rate 2/5 because you must be rated on a pro level, right? :D Continue improving yourself :)

airman4 responds:

That's interesting
Well first , thanks for your review , even with the bad grade , i dont mind (as long it's sincere and not pure bashing to break me )
The mouth is not static or just open , maybe i should put acid in a very different color but if you see well you see a movment of the acid coming out of his mouth , so i think my mistake is the color choice here preventing a good reading
For the woman , i dunno , maybe , if i remind well i drew her as she is about to shoot the monster , so she already have reloaded , now maybe another stance would have been better

For the big boulder i'm not sure ? , i dont see something perfectly horizontal to the ground ?

The ceiling could have been detailled yes but it would have made the scene hard to read
Characters are very detailled and already steal the spot

For the rope that's a good idea , i'll think about it next time
Thanks ! (you can rate me how you want , it's okay )

The many faces of politicians. Different in theory, the same in corruption.

Compared to the perfectly drawn & colored girl, background seems empty and that is unpleasant.

Shouldn't be E

10/10 skills. But I do not like the chosen theme. It is evil overkill here, on newgrounds. Perhaps it's time for change...

That is so wrong! But good draw skills so 2/5

Nice draw skills, bad theme. (rating is for chosen theme, because your skills are a10/10)

masacra responds:

^__^

Beautiful. Such a deep message. You need time for yourself to "recharge batteries". We are no robots.